Review 03.29-04.06
OK, it's time to do penance. Today's work is to review my week's writings. Let's begin.
I think it's not bad idea that copying from another material. After all, I do this job on very my own. So, there are no any people criticize or review to improve my writings, then I need to exploit other good materials to copy them.
There are some misspelling. 'Tis especially bad if a one is in cited text, fromt -> front.
It's diary style. Not too bad idea to keep writing every day, but this is too prosaic. Most important purpose of this activity is aim to pass EIKEN grade 1 exam, so I don't think this style does not much contribute that purpose.
I don't really get what the mean of "a streaming side of meat". So, I checked the Japanese version text on amazon as a last resort. Oh, gross.
All of my stocks were sold on the next of this day.
It's dialy style too. I got very useful phrase such as "loitering around the Internet." Compare to the article written on "2014.03.30", this one was much better. Hmm, the dialy style writings seems useful to acquire new useful phrases. Vexing.
It's dialy style. But not so good as 04.01. Speaking of cherry blossom, I had intend to go see flowers with my family today, but unfortunately, there are thunder at about noon so I gave up.
I think this answer isn't too bad. But time was too much consumed to produce, and utilize goole and internet translator too much. So there are much room to improve it. It'll be good this type of practice should be done once every week.
It is, if I'm force to say, a review style. I don't think this type isn't bad, but it seems there are too much mistake on grammar, and mistakenly word of choice. In hindsight, "tired anime" should be replaced to "tough anime", and "Finally" may be better replaced by "At last."
However how logic is completely messed up of this article, this one is most like essay style. I would rather prefer it. Unexpectedly, I wrote many style of writings this week, the amount of text and accompanying sense of achievement is much bigger than I anticipated. May be there are some light to keep up on this.
